Revising writing

week 6, reading task  

Hello everyone, today I will write about the lessons or experiences I have learned after receiving feedback from my readers. And what I need to do to make my next blog post even better.

After reading reviews from readers I have learned some valuable lessons for myself while writing a blog post.

 In terms of some of my advantages, it is that I have divided ideas, or content into many effective paragraphs and follow a clear layout from top to bottom as commented by readers of Lincoln and Darja Gubenko. But there is one part that I need to correct here, which is to put the first point and second point in the same paragraph and separate from the third point. This asexuality makes the reader feel confused and uncomfortable.

 In terms of cons, here I have added videos from youtube into my blog post. It can be said that this is a pretty big minus point with my post. According to readers Lincoin and Darja Gubenko, the inclusion of such a video makes my post confusing and difficult to understand.

There are 2 main things that I have learned from receiving feedback. Firstly, I should continue to promote writing with a clear specific layout so that readers find it good-looking and easy to follow the emotional circuit. Second i should extract the necessary information from those videos and then quote them below in different blog posts.

     

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